I just want to know everything I haven’t already been told.
I know it’s a story waiting to unfold.
My mind is twisted into thing of the possible unknown.
I wonder will the bright heart ever to stone.
A path I walk I can never see right in front of me.
But every path I take leads me to my destiny.
A wrong path I take and I am lost again.
Will I be able to turn back to the beginning?
An angel is above me leading the way
But what I don’t understand why the trees above me sway.
The tree leaves a message and a whisper too.
But all the sky’s color is turning more blue
Why do all things matter to me?
I don’t understand what do they buzz in my mind like a bumble bee.
I’m wondering everywhere that I go will lead to the path unknown.
A contest entry
- Anything goes! quicky! by urapns66.
325 points, ended March 31, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Kindred Spirit by jocelynclaire.
400 points, ended November 10, 2008, 17 entries
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Any comment is appreciated...
Comments
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There is depth of emotion and thought here. The questioning aspect is very relatable. I think we have all felt like this from time to time.
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thanks so much and i agree i had this choice so many times it lead to things that i didn't expect.
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"An angel is above me leading the way
But what I don’t understand why the trees above me sway.
The tree leaves a message and a whisper too.
But all the sky’s color is turning more blue"
definitely digging this lol I've been really down lately and this definitely speaks to me so thank you very much lol i needed it!
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this is awesome, i can really dig this poem especially now. thanks! good luck!
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