Gosh, why can't you see?
That you are the one
Who's been saving me
Your words deeply touch my heart
If it weren't for you
I'd have fallen apart...
A contest entry
- dear......., by Nicolette.
1100 points, ended April 14, 2008, 43 entries
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awwwwwww!ME LOVES GERARD WAY!hes hott.but u keep him.hes yours!^.^
xxleslie
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this is sweet. although you may never see him in person, you have a visual of him in you heart, being your guardian angel of sorts
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sweet.
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i liked this one...r u aware he has an account on AP
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I think Gerard would smile upon reading this note... a very sweet sincerity about it. We do need to tell people what they mean to us.
and like my co-judge said, a very nice simplicity about it.
Thank you for your entry.
~ Nicolette
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Thats amazing... wgreat write..
xxx
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It talks about Gerard Way, so I'm going to edit it so it doesn't say "god" so no one is confused ok?
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ahhhh
i love it. This doesnt have anything to do with gerard way, does it? lol, i love it. If it refers to Gerard or God, i love it.
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Touching.
It kind of makes me wonder what you've been through.
I think its a simple write that has much more depth to it.
*A Poetic Dreamer* -
this piece kind of reads like a greeting card from a Christian bookstore.
i can't quite reconsile it being titled to Gerard rather than God, but hey, what do i know? lol
nice in its simplicity
thank you for entering
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