Dear self,
You've been yourself recently.
Is there anything wrong? I would hate
To think you’d want me to exclusively
shoulder the burden of relationship.
Get well soon,
me
Author notes
~ maximum of 6 lines and/or 30 words (more or less)
~ only one adjective allowed
~ choose your words carefully
~ go for simplicity & impact
~ apply poetic devices
~ left align; plain background
A contest entry
- dear......., by Nicolette.
1100 points, ended April 14, 2008, 43 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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hmmm.. the one person we can never excape, and the one we always have to get over.
Well done!
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Thank you Klassy lassy for your comment.
Paul
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Very clever. Oh I did like this very much. You mind is amazing. Excellent. ~Pamela
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Yes, sometimes I think I'm my worst enemy because I don't realize I need the assistance of others.
Paul -
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We all need each other in one way or another. Imagine how quiet it would otherwise?
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a note to self....
excellent..sometimes, I could totally carry this little note around, too...
best of luck in the contest...
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We all need people but sometimes become too self sufficient. I know that's true of me.
Thanks for commenting.
Paul
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Lovely reflective quality about this short note to the self - or one aspect of the self.
I liked this; something many can relate to - yes...
Thank you for your entry.
~ Nicolette
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Damn,
That's something many can relate to, I think, I mean I do.
This poem rocks, and I like the way you pen, shine on poet.
-Timothy aka poeticweaver~
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Thank you Tim for your comment.
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you know they can carry you away to the funny farm for such conversations with the self, don't let them hear you, whisper to yourself
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"you know they can carry you away to the funny farm..." No they can't...why did those nice men put me in this nice white suit?
Thanks for commenting.
Paul
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Oh ..A simple yet quite a deep impact you are bringing...Reflecting the universal aspect of our life especially when we are assessing the lose and profits of this life..Well done my friend ..A great write...
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Thank you for your comment. One of the great evidences of God is within us, all a need for each other. No one can exist in isolation.
Paul
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u r 2 funny
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It's ok to write the letter...the real trouble starts when I actually get an answer.
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actually, i like this piece...
though i tend to be a bit more stern with myself when i'm acting like a bastard. lolol
thanks for entering
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sometimes we need to set ourselves down and give us a good talking to.
Thanks for commenting
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