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An angel
suddenly missing from arms,
a void in heart,
aching to be filled.
Yet she flies in heavens
where she belongs,
her beauty shining
like a bright star;
she plays with my two month child,
whose persona was lost in my womb,
doctors could not help,
a missing sibling for my children.

They play there together
with a blessing
by being held in your tender arms
and having tasted
your bountiful love,
a smile on their lips
as they await us,
a sigh on our lips
as we await them.

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  • Accidentally Poetic
    April 3, 2008

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    I'm sorry for your loss as well. Thank you for your beautiful words, they have brought comfort to us.
    God Bless,
    Crystal


    • crimsondew
      April 3, 2008
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      Sorry for your loss too...We just need to tap into our patience right now..Have a nice day!


  • daviscth silver member
    April 3, 2008

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    Your beautiful words bring much comfort to me right now. I feel pain for your loss as well but as you say... they are waiting on us to join them. Love, Cathy.


    • crimsondew
      April 3, 2008
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      I am glad I helped out...and there they are up there..shiny stars twinkling bright for you and me.


  • creationsfromheart
    April 1, 2008
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    thank you for your love and writing for cathy and her family and lil Chloe.


  • Sandra R Reynolds gold member
    March 31, 2008
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    very beautiful


  • Venugopal gold member
    March 31, 2008

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    A poem that assuage feelings of one who lost dear once. The poem captures the agony, but gives hope..Very well done..best of luck in the contest


    • crimsondew
      April 1, 2008
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      Thank you for your wishes.I can relate as i had lost a child in my womb.

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