Forgotten Miles

distance flew out the window,
as words danced on tendrils
reaching across the skies

weaving magic around hearts,
soothing souls with promises

for yesterdays' heartaches,
are healed by hopes of today
and dreams of a perfect tomorrow

years and miles

will be forgotten

by just one touch

Author notes

Prompt: Loving you from afar

In a list

A contest entry

Options, Options, Options; by Whispered Secrets. 375 points, ended May 5, 2008, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Loving You From Afar. by Poetryintheblood. 450 points, ended September 18, 2008, 20 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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Poetryintheblood
September 18, 2008
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Thank you for your beautiful entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
Whispered Secrets
May 5, 2008

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I love the background and the imagery. I thought this was interesting. my favorite lines:

for yesterdays' heartaches,
are healed by hopes of today
and dreams of a perfect tomorrow
- fortyninereasons
  May 6, 2008
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  hopes and dreams keep us going, but yesterdays' heartaches help make us what we are. Love Juls
Perfectly Imperfect
April 1, 2008

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This is so beautiful. I can relate to your words so much. I love the imagery and expression.

"for yesterdays' heartaches,
are healed by hopes of today
and dreams of a perfect tomorrow"

Well done on such a great piece and good luck in the contest x