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namita

 
 
 
 
 
the wind settles seeds
into quiet hair,
voice rests within soil of cradle-song,
 
sends fingers down to seek her water.
 

 

they find nothing but heart-
in awe that it fits in a frame so small.
 
 
 
she speaks a word, light rises 
and everything grows.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

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  • ardentMarch gold member
    April 3

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    "she speaks a word, light rises
    and everything grows."

    this part gives me goose-bumps...this is stunning and perfectly namita...I love this poem...thanks for joining our little party for her.....


  • Nicolette gold member
    April 3

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    You have indeed done her justice with this poem, Kate. It's beautiful and it brings Namita's beauty and talent into the light too. But then, you are a great poet.... so I didn't expect anything else from you.

    I really liked this one. Thank you for writing it for Namita.

    ~ Nicolette


  • Faithbound gold member
    March 31

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    She is so amazing for being so young. I always feel like I am reading a grown woman's words. You have done her justice with this beautiful piece of poetry.


  • Suzanne Dia gold member
    March 31

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    That first stanza is just breathtaking, Kate. Such a succinct image.




  • Namita silver member
    March 31

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    You write a poem, and the world fills with so much light... everything keeps growing and growing and growing forever. This is so beautiful... Thank you so much Kate. You are such a beautiful woman! Love ya loads.

    - namita


  • dehydrated
    March 31

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    this is beautiful katie... nammy is so special... you have portrayed her well

    love yah sister.

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