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The Nightmare

Last Night I dreamt
Of an ovrpowering guilt
you broke down and cried
As all your emotions spilt

You told me that you hated
The man that I became
Because the man you loved
was no longer the same

I don't recall what came next
I just know that I wanted to hear
The emotions from the woman
That I love to hold so near

But that was the end of it
I awoke to a chilly room
I fought off all my feelings
Of us coming to our doom

But I sit here and I think
About all that I expressed
And I know that you do love me
But I'm still so very stressed

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