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Pieces

Broken and scattered,
picking up pieces of yesterday,
knowing for us, there is no tomorrow.

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  • Kendal Palmer gold member
    May 6

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    I have felt this emotional impact a few times myself! you capture in very few words the raw emotion of a big heart. nice job...I'm working my way through your writing!


  • MissApparition
    April 5, 2008

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    So much said in so few lines... I've felt this way before; lost and confused, trying to pick up the pieces of my heart while dreading the lonliness ahead. Nicely written...poignant.


  • soulfultia gold member
    April 2, 2008

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    This felt deeply profound and captured in the perfect amount of lines, excellent work! Wonderful work and my pleasure to read! ~tia


  • Stardust-luvr
    March 31, 2008

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    pieces of our hearts shattered, on a journey to be mended within time and hope with each new today. well done hun and many blessings always xxx Congrats on the shiny bronze


  • Three Doves
    March 31, 2008
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    Congratulations

    Well done


  • heartnsoul
    March 31, 2008
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    Acceptance when a heart has been saddened by loss is never easy; and like moving on can be a slow and painful process. The precision of your words hits the nail on the head with a single blow.
    Congratulations on the bronze...a well deserved trophy!!
    ~Michelle~


  • Unsigned gold member
    March 31, 2008
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    Great 15 words

    Well penned Poet..

    Simon

  • Three Doves
    March 31, 2008

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    There is no tomorrow only a bunch of todays everyday. I like your take on the prompt. Best wishes in life and the contest. Peace in light and love. Be well.

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