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Silence

Silence amuses us all,
through the screams.
Hear it through the wall,
and in our dreams.

Roaming through the world,
nothing to say.
Reborn curled,
just to die in a bay.

Rebirth, Death,
Everything goes hand-in-hand.
One last breath,
I hope you'll understand.

Searching for a start with no end,
as hiding is your specialty.
All the ghosts were your friends,
this is silence in reality.

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  • Princesscecilia
    April 28, 2008
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    Thankyou. ^-^


  • mathu is dead
    March 31, 2008

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    i like the last bit the best...
    very good...especially the lines
    "as hiding is your specialty.
    All the ghosts were your friends"