Without you I would die
An empty shell of nothingness
No longer human, no desire
No need. For anything
I would give it all up for you.
For your love, your trust
I would displace myself, my world
Give the ultimate sacrifice
Never believe I don’t love you
A contest entry
- I want your best! anything goes, Also hurry because i hate waiting! by urapns66.
350 points, ended April 1, 2008, 14 entries
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Comments
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"Never believe I don’t love you" very powerful love it and good luck!
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This really made me smile. It was so simple, yet so deep. I understand your feelings completely for whoever this was written about. I have the same emotions for my husband. I think your words were expressed so tenderly and lovingly. Thank you for this read, honestly is put a sweet smile on my face.
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Oh hun you have captured such strong emotions .... to love with all your heart we do give all we have in the tust and sacrifice ... think we as females do just that hun because we love from the heart ....not saying guys do not just we tend to give.
Very nicely penned.
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