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Avant-garde

  On guard.
On guard.
guard the prophets who write.
New testament of poetic metaphor.
Awake
Awake
The inquisition draws near.
Go on ask your questions
I will answer with the new religion of poetic dream.
Did I lie?
Or
Did I just hide the truth.

A contest entry

What do you think?, I am trying to get enough material together do you think I should publish a book?

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    July 27, 2008

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    The awakening is the most beautiful experience over this earth..either it relates to the normal awakening from physical point of view or if it is related with the internal awakening as well..the thought is very inspring and very much sacred to bring the movement of this nature in this piece..the intensity of the thought is very much warm and its impact as well is very much true ..I love its message and my thanks for sharing it with me..well done...


  • TheNymph
    April 1, 2008

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    i absolutely love this poem. i see no reason why it could not be published, its contemporary, passionate and thought provoking! good luck with the publishing dream, as joseph campbell says "follow your bliss"