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Who Might I Be?

Little Red Riding Hood I might be, for I have Reddish Hair and I wear a  cloak that's Red &Black.
Mary,Mary quite contrary how do you manage to stay strong and deal with all your Health Problems?
I'm Cinderella waiting for a Kidney Transplant.For I'll need a Person who'll Match.
I've been like Humpty Dumpty and had several falls, Illnesses.All the Doctors in the land have tried to put me back together again.
3 blind mice see how they run, these would be my Son, and his 2 Cousins.
Hickory dickory dock it's time for Hubby to come home again.
Little Miss Muffet sits in her Dialysis chair stewing and complaining what a miserable day.
I'm Snow White living in a quaint Little Village.No i haven't met the seven dwarfs.but i'm part of a group of six friends.
I'm Dorothy from the wizard of oz if I could click my heals 3 times maybe my Life will be just a dream.
I have a Little Poodle and he's Apricot colored.
Heh diddle , diddle, the cat and the fiddle.
my little dog laughed to see such sport and his dish ran away with the spoon.
My Dad was a Jolly old soul, a jolly old soul was he.
he went to His Camp and called for his Son-inlaw Three.

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Who Might I be? I'm some of these people rolled into one.

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  • Randomly Beautiful
    April 24, 2008
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    Thank you for the entry. :f


  • letters to no one
    March 31, 2008

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    I like it, it is an unusual take on fairy tale characters, however, I don't think that you should have categorised it as "humour" as it is dark and sad.

    Good luck in the contest though


  • cricketjeff gold member
    March 31, 2008

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    That's different and rather enjoyable, thanks. Best of luck with the transplant wait, and all the rest of life. Look out for a fairy Godmother maybe?


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    March 31, 2008

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    I like this. It is satirical in nature.  I feel that it is written 'tongue-in-cheek' but I also feel a little bit of anger there too. Frustration? Yes.  Brilliant imagery to carry the reader along. I feel on reading this, that your health is bad?  Yet you have great skill in writing. Amazing work.

     

    Love

    Wayne Leon

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