Dear Mira,
Misty mind set reminiscent
to that day
you met the sands of time
and the tide rescinded my life
back to an age of despair.
A contest entry
- dear......., by Nicolette.
1100 points, ended April 14, 2008, 43 entries
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Please tell me what you think
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This is filled with so much heart and depth in so few words excellent write!
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Thank you for the compliments on my poem!! Happy to hear you liked it. Don
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There is something very moving about this letter - such an ache here...
I would prefer than you left align this poem - as it allows the reader to see the line breaks better - and it looks better too, lol (in my humble opinion).
I was wondering if "reminiscent" isn't an adjective too...it describes the "misty mind"?
A heartfelt letter - thank you for this entry.
~ Nicolette
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Left align is better! Thanks for the tip. Thank you for the comment and compliments on my write Nicolette. Don
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Wow...I've missed some growth in your poetry! This was a delightful piece my friend! Wonderful work and...a winner
~Tia
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What a pleasent surprize to hear from my dear friend!!!!! I have missed you hun! Thank you for the wonderful comment and the compliments on my poem! Nice to see you enjoyed it! Also nice to see your smiley face too! Love Ya, Don
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Oh My Word!!
Now this is one Brilliant piece my Friend!
You have stunned me to another century for the images and the emotion shook me out of my chair!
Magnificent also Powerful!
Loved this
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in the contest Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Thank you Desire for the inspiring comment and compliments on my poem! So happy you enjoyed it. Always a pleasure hearing from you. Don
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Oh my brother,
This is just amazing, and as I read, The calm that I was faced with, after one that left me in tears, was just amazing. You my brother, always seem to post what I need to read
Thanks for being such a wonderful brother and a special part of my life!
Best of luck in this contest!!
and love
Nyetta
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Thank you Nyetta for the beautiful comment and compliments that make my day! Happy you enjoyed this poem! A humble smile to my dear sister. Don
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a sweep of conciseness
I liked how you titled it also to your username as an outlet until honest gathering can occur it seems
this is finely reflective on who you'd like to write, so apparent to me by your language filled with sanity's sadness. there can be such reunion from reconciled dealings over 'you met the sands of time' when creation can be found for friendliness all over.
you have turning hint of what difference in your life this one meant, you'd want to relook at in the end; and guidance earth can know such comfort appreciates that.
tugs on continuum,
babies are my subject
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Thank you Bam for the beautiful comment! Happy you enjoyed it. Don
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