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corgan kai

corgan kai sayd to the flie
mr mizer sayd goodbuy
he sayd to tel you you were a nit
and he really hoped you got bit
but al tat aside
you were a really grate gide
just not his stile
you anoying wooded wile
he also sayd i hope you dy
otherwise i would not have sayd goodbuy
but so long for now
i leave you my fat cow
please dont go on the rug
even if you are a bug
its a pain to clene up
and really discusting for sup

Author notes

I dono if it's the right thing for it but here's my attempt. ._.;;; *crosses his fingers and hopes's bad enough*

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  • ForeverLastingComa
    March 31, 2008
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    wow i didn't expect the ending..hmm..


    • Bound-In-20-Chains
      March 31, 2008
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      ^^' ^^' Is it bad enough? ^^' ^^' I'm bad at writing bad poetry or trying to be bad on purpose. ._. I've tried to be bad before...but even when I was trying my hardest, I was still good. ._.;;;;; and then when I tried to be good, I always, apparently, was bad...strange. ._.;;;;;;


  • individuality gold member
    March 31, 2008

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    the madness of poetry strikes again lol let's all dance crazy becasue that's the melody that's moving our toes.