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How Sweet It Is.

I want to make a lollipop
of your pouting pinkness,

as I unwrap its nylon cover
and purse my lips around
its cherry delight.
I will bring my own stick
it is all ready to be joined
in the sticky sweetness
that my tongue lashing
will create from your
emerging Ju-Ju-bead.
Bubble gum lips urged me
to tempting mounds tipped
in light chocolate,
then on to that
jelly belly bean.
Oh, how it quivered
as you melted,
beneath my suckling.
But now I am at
the candy stored
beneath a hooded
flesh awning,
wallowing in the
sweetness of you.
you are my Baby Ruth,
I am your Sugar Daddy,
soon there will be a large vanilla tootsie roll, pop rocks,
and creamy centers galore.

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  • ErrantHeart
    April 15, 2008

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    I enjoyed this entry very much. It gave me a smile of pleasure and a taste of humorous want. Thank you.

  • Leucothea
    March 31, 2008

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    Very nice use of comparing candy we all know and love with physical acts and body parts we all know and love!!! Good work here! Thank you for sharing this hot, hot, piece of work!!!


  • heartnsoul
    March 31, 2008

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    Sounds like someone has a sweet tooth! Be careful you don't get tummy ache from all that candy! LOL...as always, you do have a way with words.
    ~Michelle~


  • secberm
    March 31, 2008

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    As always, my man, your way with words are incredible. I see, you too is a plaything of poetry's muses. Write on (as if you have a choice.) One.

    Dez