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He Lost His Muse

inK's sTinKs so me tHeenKs
reD's deAd, so's mE HeaD
sAd Lad, feeelling baHd
muse: loosed, soOOo cONfUSed
why cry?!? jes let fly
worDdss heaRd in A herD
jumBLed mumBLed a meSsSs so buMBled
sensEless, cents-lEss smokEy incEnse
bliNd miNd he cannoHt fiNd
waYyYy todaY no more to saY
inK's stinKs, so he thinks!

Author notes

ok if you wonder why i bothered to mess this up so badly and make it awkward well, that is what the contest holder asked for!

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  • ForeverLastingComa
    March 31, 2008
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    i actually disagree the only thing i found horrible was the sticky caps


  • Lady Altheia
    March 31, 2008

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    Okay that ios pretty bad. I knew there was a reason I hated sticky caps. It was barely legible for me to read,