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When Memory Fails (triolet)

Life follows its long paper trail
Fragile we are in thoughts that drift
We age and then memories fail
Life follows its long paper trail
Somewhere traces of a love tale
Whispering to the heart its gift
Life follows its long paper trail
Fragile we are in thoughts that drift

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  • suseann
    March 31, 2008

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    An unacknowledged feeling we just can't quite put our finger on yet its emotionally still burned deep in our minds and hearts.You weave a deep colorful majestic cloth in this triolet with the talents of the masters.


  • individuality gold member
    March 31, 2008

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    a good piece of poetry - the triolet it is a great form for expressing love thoughts, and too other darker ones but love mainly