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The Goddess

She was very strong and always giving
for which she was granted beauty divine
She was mother to all we know
a role she fulfilled perfectly fine

We are her beloved children
to whom her devotion was conveyed
but we took all she gave us and thensome
and it is Her that we have betrayed

For she is the Earth and she's dying
and we act like we've played no part
stumbling blindly on in selfishness
as we rip out her still-beating heart

Is it any wonder she cries in despair
not for her own self, though, does she weep
for when finally she dies from our hands
there will be no future to keep

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  • Rianna Bear
    April 2, 2008

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    ni-ice! you know, as obvious as it seems now, i never even thought of seeing it as a broken down mother eart, so i tip my hat to ya! as sad as this was, it is true, and that breaks my heart. thanks for sharing and for your entry.

    *R


  • Lady Altheia
    March 31, 2008

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    Awww, Mother Earth is in pain because not enough is being done to perserve her. Good luck in your contest.