For the chaotic queries
they have one insensible answer
like sorry doesnt have a meaning
when roof tops tumble
under emotions pressure
...every whimper
scares their adversity
such that there is no eyeliner
shading their eyes
enhanching sweetness
to shiver in their cold.
Hexagon circular and pentagon
cuttings on clothes
once bought somwhere
too hazy to remember
too lazy to care.
For even one push
with your little finger
can make them break
like Robert Frost
could vomit in agony
of his own world...
sharded and marred
its beauty ripped
like subtle changes
being brought
but only the one who
stand and stare
can comprehend
the insanity of losing
the place called home.
For an aching heart...
they dont care
but for an destroyed house
their voices say
THANK YOU VERY MUCH
but their souls...
.....smolder in the quagmire
of dreams to be.
A contest entry
- QUICKIE!!! PIC PROMPT.--only 10 ENTRIES!!!! by Rianna Bear.
450 points, ended April 2, 2008, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
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this was a very heartfelt piece that i feel touched on the picture w/great emotion, intensity, and...what's the word...w/a bit of a storyline. thanks for sharing and for your entry.
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Thanks for the gold!!
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