My pleasures
laid the path
not aware “what is good or bad”
I am the centre
around which thoughts revolve
all the activities
around this circle
circumscribed by me
in playing web and tide
“Acton and reaction”
“sufferings and Joys”
Can I let this centre go
Where everything gravitates
Lighten my burdens
Of my own making
Very existence “is this centre”
From which emanates all thought
When centre disappears
Self dies
Merges into infinity
Author notes
Self creates centre
A contest entry
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i really like this- i can tell what you're trying to say and each stanza leads into the next very nicely-
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This is such a brilliant poem. I really loved this. You have spoken true words of wisdom and made some very valid points here. "Lighten my burdens of my own making". I really loved these lines. They said so much.
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Venugopal
Is centre the same as center here in the usa Think it is. Very nice write Brother love this Good luck
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