Caught within Limbo,
The twilight of endings.
Is there anything there?
Return home,
Leaving shattered illusions.
The sorrow-scream of loss
Internalized at last.
Devil-existence of doubt
is drowned in realization.
Slavery at no price;
The liberation to break into
new glimmering pieces
that know all of
what a 'self' is.
Author notes
If I broke the rules in any way, I apologize in advance. The list is so hard, and I am pretty ADD sometimes...EDIT: HAve officially messed up once now.
A contest entry
- MEGA Anti-wordbank (BIG Points!!!) by Metaphorist.
1500 points, ended March 31, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
please tell me what to improve
Comments
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I think you're good as far as the rules are concerned. I liked this. Maybe could be longer. But other than that, good images and thoughts. Thanks for entering.
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I want to look at the contest rules...this seems very interesting!
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a good piece and i know how hard it is with those anti word banks to get a good poem flowing right, a good job here
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