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....I Won't Overeat

Apples, cherries, berries, apricot,
I know today I have eaten a lot,
Before I move, I need to halt,
"Burp" I am sorry not my fault.
It was my friends wedding party,
the meal was lavish and hearty,
Though I didn't intend overeating,
everything there was so tempting.
I couldn't but help trying it all,
starters meal dessert, I had a ball.
I couldn't say goodbye when I left,
how could I, with my stomach so heft.
Oh what a party, what a blast,
wish that meal would forever last,
But then what about my slim figure,
a lot of fat this food will trigger,
I think I am better as I am now,
and just wish to reach home somehow,
Come and carry me once my hubby sweet,
I promise not to overeat.


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  • piccola silver member
    April 2, 2008

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    this reminds me of when I get the chance to eat fried potatoes which I shouldn't have in the first place ... or lobster tail which I could pile them as tall as I am and never stop eating. yummmm thanks for entering


  • Venugopal gold member
    March 31, 2008

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    Same thing happened to me in Jaipur. The food is so delicious i over ate.Parotas, Roti, Sabji, gheera rice, Ghulabjam etc. Thanks for reminding me through your poem..a delicious write