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The stupidest poem
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Author notes
This is probably the stupidest thing I have ever written. I wrote it about 3 years ago while playing around with a phrase that was in a local Parke Players melodrama. Laugh! Laugh! Laugh! 'Cause it's a gas! Gas! Gas! More or less... Considerably less than more... Thank more or less.
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- ADD YOUR WORST HERE! I want something different and by different i mean YOUR WORST POEM!! This will be hilarious give me anything =) by ForeverLastingComa.
370 points, ended April 1, 2008, 17 entries
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Heheheh you have me laughing my socks off, this is hilarious and the silly thing is I have no idea why!!! I get many good laughs when I don't know why I'm laughing, insanity perhaps? Anyway I really enjoyed this.
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Georgia,
Thanks for stopping the silly zone. It's so full of stupidity its appealing. It's one those that I call 'a throw away poem'. I was just messing around with a phrase I heard at a play one night. This was the result. I'm glad you like it! It's certainly a departure from what I usually write. Thanks again.
~Donna~
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wow..this poem leaves me confused..this is horrrible..good luck =D =p i thought it was weird..good job =)
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It's a lot of double talk. You're correct... this is the worst thing I have ever written. Well... at least next to one called 'Forever Hearts'. That one was really bad! LOL!
Thanks for your great analysis of this monstrosity.
~Donna~
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BluRosePoet8488
This sucks
really bad lmao How could you even enter this into a contest hehe just kidding Good luck think its worse than mine
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Why thank you. LOL! It's an embarrassment isn't it? LOL! I'll have to read yours. Thanks again.
~Donna~
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My head hurt from reading this poem.What is it, like five paragraphs of the same thing?Jesus christ.Yeah, I'm pretty sure I don't like this one.
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It would have been 5 stanzas, but I cut one of them out! LOL! Like I said it's the stupidest thing I have ever written! LOL! Thanks for your comment!
~Donna~
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