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Sanctuary

The one place where all my worries dissapear
There's no pain, no sadness, no fears
This place is on my horse's back
I instantly feel relaxed

Troubles fly away
I wish I could stay on there all day
My legs grip tight
And we're off into the sunlight

Sometimes I just want to take off
Just my horse and me
Go anywhere we want
Be wild and free

I daydream this as I'm cantering my horse
But then my mom's voice jolts me back into the real world


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  • mysticstorm gold member
    April 10, 2008

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    What a great escape...There is nothing as free feeling as on the back of a horse, where your spirits soar free...lovely write on something so special and relaxing...nicely done!
    Best,
    mystic


  • grannyeri gold member
    March 30, 2008
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    Horses are a great way to escape the worries of the world and just concentrate on riding - a great way to relax and enjoy the time spent with the horse. Easy to read and understand these sentiments expressed so well in these lines. Yup, when mom calls, - time to wake up and get back to reality.