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[[Aphid Attraction]]

Taped up mouth
Scribbled out eyes
I'm just an unseen&&unheard memory
In your (un)perfect mind
Nicotine fixes
And lust filled eyes
Was all we had in common
In this web full of lies
I let you paint over my blackened heart
For you to burn it once more
Now so fragile yet devious
I exist through only my needs

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  • poeticweaver gold member
    March 30, 2008

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    Wow,

    Now that's a potent piece of poetry.
    Well expressed indeed! Pen on poet, Peace~

    -Timothy aka poeticweaver~