I want you to know
I was lost when I found you
Walking alone
In the cold
You seemed so perfect
But fragile and weak
And I knew that
We walked the same road
I wanted to help you
To break your bonds
An addiction
You loved so well
And I never realized
The poisons I took
Were leading me
To the same hell
So I want you to know
I was trapped when I found you
Even though
I thought I was free
But now I know
I'd be lost without you
Somehow Loving you
Has saved me
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Hoodwink!
Oh wow. This is an amazing piece, absolutely breathtaking. The flow is perfect, and the message is WONDERFUL and so well-conveyed.
"So I want you to know
I was trapped when I found you
Even though
I thought I was free"
I really enjoyed reading this, you've penned something of deep beauty and strong emotion here.
~lost
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