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Briefly

Muddled mystic moments.

Subtle pauses, slashed
through reality.

Mundane task's retreat.

Twisted trip through
timeless vision.

Innocent break into
imagination.

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20 Words.

A contest entry

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  • Ephiphany
    April 10, 2008
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    Loving the short and simple piece.

    Very good
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  • Lyrical Rain
    April 9, 2008

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    I loved it once again because its simple and to the point. I cannot write like this my emotions overtake me completely.


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    March 31, 2008
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    quite a way to look at the thinking process,it works well thank you for this entry good luck...Lin