birds scratching dry grass
big orange bellies
early spring
Author notes
My first robins of the season as I drove home the other night.
A contest entry
- Springtime Originals by Hoosierpoet.
700 points, ended April 21, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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very cute, those robins have been feasting, great visual here


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Robins are one of my favourite birds, and this poem pictures them nicely
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Much said in a few words. Makes me want to go "bird watching"! Thanks for entering my contest.
Moses




