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Voices

The voices they call,
Inside your head,
As thoughts and memories,
Start to spread.

You start to shake,
You try to scream,
As you wish,
It was all a dream.

The voices in your head,
Get louder and louder,
As you listen to their words,
Over and over-

"Its your fault,
Its your fault,
It's her blood you shed."
"You did it,
You did it,
And now she is dead."
"Admit it,
Admit it,
You lost control,
You stabbed her twice,
And watched her fall."

You listen and listen,
You can't take much more,
As you walk outside,
You drop to your knees,
And start to crawl.

You look at the houses,
You look at the street,
You look at the sky,
As you start to scream-

"I did it!
I did it!
Its my fault shes dead."
"I stabbed her twice,
And watched as she bled."
"Forgive me,
Forgive me,
I will pay the price,
Ill be in hell by tonight."
"Im sorry,
Im sorry,
For the tears that were shed."
"Voices,
Voices,
Get out of my head,
My heart is already,
Filled with dread."
"Tonight,
Tonight,
This will all end.

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  • XXxXBassMeisterxXxX
    June 1, 2008

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    Avoslutely amazing write. It reminds me of a monologue my friend performed. I loved it. It was beautiful. Best of luck in the contest.


  • Werewolf Avarus
    March 30, 2008

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    wowies!!
    lol great write Tam, love it!!!!!!!

    luv Kate


  • Scarlet-Raven
    March 30, 2008
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    Hehe good poem ... stupid voices o.o


  • Ravenblood
    March 30, 2008
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    forgot these.


  • Ravenblood
    March 30, 2008

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    Woah, very catchy and rhyme'y and really awesomeness!

    keep up the great work..

    Claire-Anne


  • IchiSora
    March 30, 2008

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    good poem i noticed a typo in there though xD "You can take much more," i think its meant to be can't. i felt it was very sad that the person was going to kill herself for that keep up the good work mahal kita ingat

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