Truth is always universal in nature
and staining it with our abundant lies aches more in me
In all these years I didn’t plead for any respite in my busy schedules
Nor can I say firmly, that I am frigid in many of my hot endeavours /decisions
I operated devotedly in my work environment
and thus not becoming Cantankerous in many of hard situations,I encountered
Hallowed promises made by any of my colleagues irritated my tempers
and it whistled to my conscience, to tackle the circumstances amicably
Yesterday ‘s strategies may not fare well and serve good in todays changed environs
and they may even operate in lower frequency bringing the whole working style to stand still.
Author notes
ption 1
This is a word bank.
Please use a minimum of 2 words per 6 lines of text.
Root or extension of words allowed.
A contest entry
- Time for a detailed contest....no quickie here. All options, prompts and honest muse. by isisspirit.
540 points, ended April 12, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This seems more a philosophy prose than a poem.
I have no problem with that whatsoever so don't stress
I like what you say here, and the word bank words have been well intergrated so they don't stick out. Often poets are inspired by word banks but in reading the poem back it seems has the words not been neceserry, they would not have been used. Anyway, as I was saying, This is flowy, even for free prose and that impressed me. Your stanza breaks are effective and the content is rich and thought provoking. This would be a fantastic thing i think, for one to write at the end of the year and stick on ones fridge. It is a personal reflection which means it is full of passion and meaning. The semi simple language you chose is extremely effective also. I like this very much.
Thankyou kindly for your entry.
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