Ive thought about it
thought twice
couldnt stop this love
i could have died
what happend to you
what happend to me?
did i do something wrong?
was it something i just couldnt see?
Now that your gone
i fulfuilled your grave
i drove and crashed
i slammed my head on the pave
who would of guessed?
the would if full of many suprises..
Aiden my love..
a new love will arise.
How was it
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love is what you make it.
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Nice
Lots of spelling mistakes, but other than that it's really good.
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yay
i like it. who is aiden... if i may pry....
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Sweettt. That was cool. The only thing is, there're some grammar mistakes. In line 9, it should be "you're" not "your". And in line 10 you spelled fulfilled wrong. And where it says "who would of guessed" it should say "who would HAVE guessed". Last thing: in the third to last line, did you mean to say "the world is full of many surprises"? Cause "the would if" doesn't make sense... and you spelled surprise wrong, lol. Other than that, I really love the poem. Great job!
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Ooooh. Who's Aiden? Hehe. Yay! Anywayz... nice poem. Very interesting. (Duh. You're stuff always is!) Nice write, as per your usual standards.
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oooh. whos aiden?
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xoxo
mee
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