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sweet evil

what is life but an evil path we walk
mocking you

when you are down

and holding you there while you suffer

but every now and then

it will let the sun shine in

giving you a glimpse of what it promised you

happiness,

you are that light

in my life

my reason for holding on

so show me now

how important i am to you

and don't let me go

hold me tight

for forever and a day

and live with me in this sweet evil

that is life

 

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  • PerfectImperfection
    March 31, 2008

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    This seems more like a 'love' poem, the battles faced in this life to hold on to what beauty can lie... Thank you for your entry!

  • meat
    March 30, 2008

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    sweet evil

    I have never read a more true poem in my life. If life is not a sweet evil than nothing is and your poem explains it perfectly....exhilarating!