I know i seem complicated
but i'm really just afraid
afraid to live my life with out you
afraid that no matter how hardi try to get you back you'll just pull away twice as hard
afraid of the knowledge that you have so many choices
so why me? what makes me different? is this really love or just another thick purple fog clouding our minds? if that's all it is then i hope it never lifts.
A contest entry
- All about love. by OurxBeginning.
300 points, ended June 24, 2008, 19 entries
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Comments
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A sweet tribute to your loved one. On the other hand I have a few suggestions. You may want to reread this and fix your spelling errors. Also, it would look better in stanza form, instead of a big paragrah. The ending was my favourite part. Thanks for entering and good luck.
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Beautiful
Loved this! beautifully penned and well titled too. I loved how you incorporated the title into the poem & made the poem revolve around that and really loved how you used it. you never wat this purple fog to lift that was just beatiful because your in a state of bliss-filled Heaven as if you wer eon Cliud 9 isanother way of stating it. any ways excellent write and enjoyed reading this
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lol is this like the Prince song Purple Rain? lol jk. its good
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