What is love? Love is pain, love is lonelyness, love is a disease, love is death
Love, the sound of the word makes me sick to my stomach makes my skin crawl, was it worth it to put me through it all?
the pain, the teas, the heartache, well to you it's just a game...
but i always win.
A contest entry
- What Is...? 10/20 by Gypsie Ink.
450 points, ended June 20, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This doesn't meet the line requirements of my contest.
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Interesting!
Love is what you make it....A powerful write. Thank you for entering and Best of Luck! -
Muhahahahahahahahaha!!!!! I loved your very last words BUT I ALWAYS WIN. Mmm that felt extremely powerful & insightful in it sown lil ways because you were merely dosplaying that you can't be trapped by the game of love & your heart messed round with ect. any ways very intriguing well penned poem but kinda scary too becuse if that was what love was truly about I don't think I'd be able to comprehend it. any ways well penned & nice work
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I liked the use of the word "rawl" rather than "crawl". Lonelyness seems like a spelling mistake.
All in all I liked the poem more so cause you try to define "what is love".
Also I felt as if the effect of the first 4 lines was dissipated by the last line - it seems quite weak.
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