Tried to catch up and maybe get ahead
but as usual I just got caught up instead
Trapped in the workings of an unfair world
got really tied up as I twisted and twirled
Then the exhaustion got the best of me
so here I dangle lifeless for eternity
A contest entry
- Not so Delightful Picture Inspired Contest by delightfulmess.
450 points, ended April 3, 2008, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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OH my goodness. 
Wonderful take on the pic. 
Thank you for entering my contest. 
Delila
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OH HOW TRUE THIS IS!!!!
This has been me all through my years, caught up with the things around me and lost within myself.
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The picture is something else, and your words highlight it very well. One thing, in your second line, it should be caught up not catch up...other than that...a great job. Good luck.
Kelli -
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Thanks, and thanks for catching that!
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