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His Song



I’ve looked for him my whole life
waited for him to come along
and all it took was me listening
to hear his sweet love song.

He sang to me some sweet words
made me hunger for what I don’t have
he set this longing within me
and now I want him with me so bad.

Why had our paths not crossed before
I’ve wondered in my mind
Why haven’t I heard his calling to me
in this song of my life and its time.

I hear those sweet tones ringing
it is such music to my ears
my heart it feels such longing
that it draws me close to tears.

And then they fade away again
real life comes back into play
but my heart still feels his song
and deep within it , it will stay.

Until the next time he comes
in the days that I need him so
which seems to be everyday now
I want him to stay not go.

But as his songs comes to an end
I breathe a sigh and shed a tear
was I dreaming of his existance
hearing a song I longed to hear?

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  • ckwriter69
    March 31, 2008

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    Very nice love write. I can feel you emotions and heartfelt feeling expressed here. His song may be a calling for you to answer with a song of your own. Thanks for sharing your thoughts and never quit writing.

  • Bob Fox
    March 30, 2008

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    You know

    The power of a song can take one a long way. & if it leads to love that that is wonderful. You should whisper HIS song to him