Come dance with me said Jezebel,
the gypsy could misfortune tell.
Bejeweled in glitter ruby rings,
tugged upon his weak heart strings.
Rose red lips that taste divine,
smooth silken skin so soft and fine.
The music plays she sways her hips,
she wets her red red ruby lips.
As passion's fire began to stir,
he pulls her close to dance with her.
Kisses sweet as wine desire peaks,
she offers him the release he seeks.
Lightning flashes neath moon so pale,
softly sighs with each in and exhale.
The gypsy women he would never forget,
with ruby lips delicious and wet.
Author notes
Word Bank...
ruby , dance, rose, glitter, smooth, music, fire, release, lightning
In a list
A contest entry
- Paying It Forward - Two Prompts - Come Pick by PhantomsAngel87.
450 points, ended April 4, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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From the background, to the picture to your words my eyes danced down the page admiring this more and more
An exellcent write
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Thank you & Best of luck
Stay safe
~Manda
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Lovely Comment
Thank you for the lovely comment Amanda, Always a pleasure to read them. I hope all is well witrh you. Bless you my sweet friend.
Take care,
Sandy
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oh this is such a beautiful piece i can here the music and image this piece it is amazing well done grammmy
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Wonderful comment dear grandaughter. Thank you for always stopping in and bringing me a smile. Grammy
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I could heer the music playing, see the gypsy caravans,
and feel the passion so strong lightning filled the air. I was very happy when I found this poem! You did a great job penning this poem, and I think it deffinately deserves to place in the compitition. -
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Thank you for the lovely commeny.
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I totally agree with Icywind55. It really does give a beautiful image in the reader's head. My favorite part is the last two lines. This is simply wonderful!
. Rewarded 4
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Thank you for stopping by and reading. I appreciate your nice comment. You take care, Sandy
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Any place one can this vision
The eyes read, the ears heard, the heart wants to know where????hahaha This is you isn't it I knew it all along lady sunshine of mistery....mac
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I thought I had found you out from this picture
I am getting so good at blanking things out. Now I have to start all over again. I said we all have play clothes we wear around the hous, I thought these were yours. Yeal! you found me out. I didn't mention the color purple at all, me thinks the lady has some shades of it on. Well if I made you laugh and roar I don't think any one heard you and knows it was you. too clod for aynone to wear anything like that over here-right now...mac -
Good morning sweet friend. Your comments are always so full of smile.
You always brighten my day. You take care and stay well. Always, Sandy
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Amazing poem, very imaginative and the imagery is to say the least very good.
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Thank you for the lovely comment. Take care, Sand
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Romantic and inviting
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Thank you , your comment was very nice and most appreciated. You take care, Sandy
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Wonderful use of the words... forms a painted picture in the mind. A tale of suduction and desires filled. So well written as usual a true feast for the reader.
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Wonderful Comment Dear Friend
Good morning again sweet friend. I am glad you enjoyed my tale of the tempting gypsy.
. You always bring me smiles. You take care and you keep smiling along with me. Bless you always, Sandy
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