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Pavement

Miles of pavement still lie ahead of me
Walking deserted roads with no destination
Numb
A cold chill surrounding
Lost
I pray for warmth
But the cold wind just keeps coming

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  • Lj-
    April 7, 2008
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    Reminds me of a Robert Frost poem.

    Thank you for your entry,
    Best of luck.


  • Kelli Marie
    March 30, 2008

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    This is well written poetry. I want to reach out and help you. Give you a blanket. Great job. Good luck.
    Kelli