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Abseil

Abseil

Ascend on high upon shimmering cord
Below, and array of mechanical dots
Silent and peacefully perched on a rope
Earthly binds left far behind
In the distance the view overwhelms 
Lost in an enchanted world of rope




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  • Phed
    April 1, 2008

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    great

    I see you've started your new job! Well done. This poem almost makes me want to jump off something.... in the best possible way.


    • -Ang-
      April 3, 2008
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      thanks Phed, we havent quite started yet, its more like train for a week, off for a week and a half, train for a day, off for a week.... its a slow process, but its well worth the wait in the end.

      thanks for your comment
      ang