Butterflies dance upon my skin
Delivering a thousand kisses
From the divine,
Your lips
Masquerading as mortal flesh
Do not fool me.
I see the stardust in your eyes
I feel how you conduct
The cells and sinew of my body
An orchestra of pleasure
A symphony of waves
Rising and Falling
At your command.
What magic do you weave
That my body should answer your voice
Radiant with wet happiness
Breaking open in delight?
I am reborn in each new moment
By your fingertips
Re-forging with fire
Your lips ignite me
My body softly whispering
A calm breeze.
At the furthest edge of pleasure
There is a cliff
I fell over
Into ecstasy.
Author notes
making love inspires me.
A contest entry
- What Inspires You? by honorable mention.
726 points, ended April 4, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Bravo!!!!!! This is stunning! Well deserved Hm but I think it should have gotten a shinnier shiny!
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Soft and sensual
Loved the last two lines, a fabulous ending to a delicately soft and sensual write. I love your restraint in being too graphic in the descritions, makes it all the more aluring. This breathes the life of authentic love. Well done!
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" ...I am reborn in each new moment
By your fingertips ... "
you really capture well the vitality of life when one sees the world thru fresh eyes & being completely present. thanks.
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Ok...i have a cig if ya need one.
Wow.
Very well constructed.
Immense and flowing description.
How many times a day are you inspired...lol
Definitely enjoyed it.
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This is beautiful, i can definitely relate to this one..
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This is a beautiful expressiuon of how you are touched by your lover. You have woven some beautiful imagery into the pattern of this romantic piece. A most beautiful piece of writing. Well done and thank-you for sharing
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superb
you astound me
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I now know how a woman feels. this is very softly written but expresses a "well" of passion, desire and ultimately ectasy. falling over the edge. It's beautiful writing.
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thank you. i am pleased with how this one turned out too.
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Very nicely done. Thanks for entering.
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Great Write
Very passionate, You use great imagery, After reading Ecstacy I wanted to get caught up in ecstacy again. Feeling loves sweet rapture
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thats the great thing about this kind of ecstasy. it feeds its own fire. thank you for lovely comment.
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