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....Broken doll!

Shattered dreams and broken glass
Is there a difference, can we last?
Hanging on grasping tight
Stay with me one more night.
Neon lights fish net tights!
Spinning under pointless stars
Twirling into your open arms
Pouring rain feels insane
Memories fading, they don’t always last
Love is broken just look at the past.
Fading scares and lullaby cries
Late at night tears stream down
I’m here its real, can you see,
Tell me doll, are you proud of me?

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  • brian180
    April 3, 2008

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    hmmmm .i like it.you definately have a talent.i love the words you used and made so simple but complex.very dark and i love that it means the person is deep.


  • only1love4ever
    March 31, 2008

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    oh babe that is great. THis is a wonderful poem. You've changed your writing style again. I like this differnt side of you, how you show the softer texture of your love, fading back within the shadows of everlasting sorrow, full of doubt, but full of sparkling passion. Your soul holds many emotions girl, let them speak for you, it is marvelous what you did here. Talk to ya soon...Love,
    Only1love4ever


  • dust -in-the-wind
    March 30, 2008

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    wow this was really good i really liked this one
    you did a GREAT job on this nice work keep up the great work keep on writing lol
    ~brookeann~