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Sacred Circle

Missing image

The

Puzzles

in my life

fit together and form a square

As

Mother Nature

is in balance

and

God

is everywhere

 

Mother Nature

has surrounded me

with beauty of all kinds

Daily

I seek new pleasure

and

welcome the new finds

 

Season to season

I welcome the change

As the sun circles the earth

and

nature is rearranged

 

Born

Native American

and

proud to be

I

have traveled

a

Sacred Circle

and

kept my heart free

 

 

Author notes

The painting is by renowned artist Bev Doolittle

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  • apoeticinjustice gold member
    April 1, 2008

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    Very beautifully written, a perfect match to the picture prompt. A very enjoyable read, thanks for entering.
    Rory


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    April 1, 2008

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    Oh, Mary---this is exceptional!!!!!!!
    Perfect in visual form
    and perfect in the message you send!!

    Aesthete


  • arafura gold member
    March 30, 2008
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    Mother Nature! A lovely poem my friend!


  • pantress silver member
    March 30, 2008
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    This is what makes it all worth living for

    "Mother Nature has surrounded me
    with beauty of all kinds
    Daily I seek new pleasure
    and welcome the new finds



    Season to season
    I welcome the change
    As the sun circles the earth
    and nature is rearranged"

    'nature is rearranged'--what a great way to look at it. This is surely a winner. Jen


  • old dog
    March 30, 2008
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    Beautiful poem and a great choice
    of Doolittle's work. I hope you win.

  • judmc
    March 30, 2008
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    Lovely poem

    A very nice poem beautifully rhymed filled with many
    sentiments that I share and extremely well written
    I am pleased that you are proud to be a native american and I hope you keep well.
    may I recommend"Peter's Girl" I think you may like it
    Best Wishes George+++

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