Oh God
this sky is not within my zone
however, I do perceive that
you endure in the sky
It is also in my comprehension
that you are my life line
I just supposed to obtain you
not your sky
I am overcurious in you
not your widths
I am a little man
and my cravings are very little
one of my succinct passion is
to impart you on this terra firma
Oh God...
Author notes
Prompt..
Hold fast to Dreams, for without them we are like birds with broken wings. ~Chinese Proverb
A contest entry
- My Life Line... by Condemd RyeZing.
525 points, ended April 22, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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i loved this! it speaks volumns of this relationship this need~~~
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Nice job. It's good.
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The ponderings about God continue and are interesting to read.
jjj
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Mighty and powerful is your pen. This was a well written piece with great emotion. Thank you for sharing it and best wishes in all of your endeavors. Keep that pen handy and ever ready for use dear poet. Good luck in the contest!
♥ Touchof1der -
Reverance
This holds such an air of humility to it. I think God loves every one of your poems for sure.
Paul
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