Intoxication is my only defence,
why else would I sleep upon a fence?
If I don't move from here and soon,
I'll wind up snoozing all afternoon.
The party was delightfully swell
but now I have the head from hell.
Yet today I'm feeling far to lazy,
last nights events are a little hazy.
I'm sure these bars are made of ice,
as strange longings they do entice.
Oh dear, moving I must review,
as now I'm desperate for the loo!
Author notes
Use the picture as your muse.
rhyme only
20 lines or less
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt by piccola.
450 points, ended April 2, 2008, 13 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - #57 For Silver and Gold members by daviscth.
300 points, ended April 17, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is adorable. I loved the words as well as the photo. Thanks so much for posting.
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lol this is adorable! congrats to you on the silver! Made me smile. ~blessings always~ Trisha
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Heehee, when ya gotta go, ya gotta go! Very cute and funny write. Congratulations on winning Silver!
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cute take on the pic. I like the ending. A lot of the entrants also think he's hungover. I was thinking if the bars were frozen he'd stick and then ... what an ugly image that brings to mind lol. thanks for entering
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Excellent
Very well expressed. Such a great creation. Best of luck in the contest
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desperate for the loo great ending. Great write good luck with this made me chuckle hehe 
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Very good LOL love it
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lol...
This is great..so funny..
It is well written and nice flow in it..All the best!
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LMAO
What a poem!!! I love it rofl....so clever adn i know the feeling though ive never slept on a fence HAHA..Awesome poem mum very fun n i love the picture.
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Brilliant
This is Brilliant humorous and fun you have taken this picture and done a fab job with this loved it. All the best of luck in this contest Brian.
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