pulsating heartbeat
faster with touch
quicksand kisses
quicksand kisses
sinking into
the fibers
of my very being,
igniting passions desires.
lay...
lay with me
'till morning's light
surrendering to
tantalizing
anticipations
of
passions touch.
sweetly surrendering
to your touch-
your kiss
"take me, darling
i am yours"
In a list
A contest entry
- Love Poetry Please by FallingTwilight.
390 points, ended April 16, 2008, 40 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Beautiful piece; very well-written. Nicely done.
Thank you for entering my contest and best of luck,
-Kaitlyn -
Excellent
Such a beautiful creation. So very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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Beautiful write here
Very softly written you do have a loving flare to this typw of poetry
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Thank you for your beautiful entry, good luck, Josie
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You are right I do Like this,
I'll take that back, I love this piece.
This is my kind of poetry,
but you already know that LoL.
I usally try to find a favorite part,
but with this piece I couldn't do that.
I simply fell in love with the whole piece.
This is some very beautiful writing.
Perfect job ,,,
Loveandblessings2u & yours always
Joyce
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Beautiful!!
Oooooooooooooooooooh this one grabs and caresses the Heart
Love this one!!
Woooooooooooooo Hoooooooooooo
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Voice~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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This is so lovely!
Soft and sensual from beginning to end and even the bg!
This is beautiful!
Lynda
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A VERY BEAUTIFUL PIECE, INDEED - FROM A VERY BEAUTIFUL WOMAN!
"take me, darling
i am yours"
And if this lucky fellow doesn't take you all the way to paradise and beyond with his heavenly touch and sweet kisses - I know of - at least - one eager volunteer who'd be willing to take you there - and fly HIGH into the sky in your loving arms sharing all of your sensual and spiritual charms! A fine piece, as always, Sweet N'Yetta.
Peace & Love!
Earl.
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applaud this
WOW! the suduction in that very good
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Very nice.
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wowww...surrendering to tantalizing
anticipations of passions touch...
I am happy with your happiness here
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beautifully and lovingly seductive and passionate, with a perfect flow. I loved this, Sis!!!
love ya
Michelle
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oh goodness!
This is passionate! wow, a very nice write!
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Wow...it really worked well Sis...
wonderfully passionate and I love it...
Your Brother
Simon...
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