Snow melts away as fresh sun warms the ground
hailing spring's breath that is sighing around.
Dazzling blooms of all kinds peek their heads from below
as proudly they stretch out in magnificient glow.
Murmurs of new life can be heard everywhere
with this view of our planet there is none to compare.
Pink and white blossoms with fragrance so sweet
waft through the air to earth's resonant beat.
Then suddenly these blossoms float away on the breeze
heralding life's next cycle with elegance and ease.
Author notes
Write me a TEN LINE poem using the prompt:
New blossoms
In a list
A contest entry
- Blooming Semi-quickie by StormGoddess.
500 points, ended April 4, 2008, 12 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Beautifully done, nice flow and good images. Congragulations on winning the bronze.


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Oh I really like this. Love the flow and rhyme, and the sentiments are great. Nicely done. Thank you for entering and good luck. Storm
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this is a beautiful piece gran and the way you have penned it with such strong imagery well done gran


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butiful mum
i love spring it so fresh ... good luck in the contest
xxx cheeky xxx







