Leaps of flavor
cast fragrances loss.
Costly endeavors
haunt forever’s freedom.
A call into wilderness
shakes fevers embrace.
My life has meaning
although running.
Turning bends
hide ongoing freedom.
As storms prisons
lock lessons embrace.
Gauntlets drink
disguises realities bliss.
Haunting nightmarish invasion
upon truthful backdrops.
Receiving nothing of life,
lost to demonic existence.
Painting false beauty
into perfections design.
Only wanting honesty...forever!
Author notes
not sure the title fits...
any suggestions are welcome!
A contest entry
- Astonish Me! by Touchof1der.
525 points, ended March 31, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This flows effortlessly as if the words just spilled forth when one pulled back the shade that hides the heart. Thank you for sharing and best wishes to you in all of your endeavors. Keep that pen handy and ever ready for use dear poet. Good luck in the contest!
♥ Touchof1der -
honesty is one thing that many people search for but can not always find. its a powerful write with depth and meaning
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