An Unprovoked assault.
Causing mayhem and destruction.
Not only physical.
Feelings, judgment in disorder.
Now within containment.
From the tormenting eyes.
Away in isolation from all.
Shall sit with shut blinds.
The outside.
The only trepidation.
Author notes
this is about Agoraphobia a person whom has been savagly attacked and fallen fear to the outside world.
this contest was hard lol.
A contest entry
- MEGA Anti-wordbank (BIG Points!!!) by Metaphorist.
1500 points, ended March 31, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Fact: i need comments.
Comments
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I know it was hard
Nice job. A great portrayal of what I imagine this feels like. I wish the outside was my only trepidation but that's another story.
Thanks for entering.
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