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Realities Truth

Pasted delusions
haunt frequent beauty.
Light enters
through dark thoughts.

Visions quest
invades solutions trance.
Clouded judgment
flies reverently wild.

Winds torment
hollows nightmares seclusion.
Blowing freedom
into captive thoughts.

Prisons chains
rescue violent delusions.
Masking forever’s heart
into deepened pools release.

Causing interior turmoil
to paint reality in full.

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  • Touchof1der silver member
    March 31, 2008
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    This is without a doubt quite powerful and has me thinking as I walk away from the words spoken here. Best of wishes to you in all of your endeavors and thank you for sharing. Keep that pen handy and ever ready for use dear poet. Good luck in the contest!
    ♥ Touchof1der


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    March 30, 2008

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    this is beautiful written with alot of thought and strength in your words. i love the imagery and metaphors


  • Topaze
    March 30, 2008
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    Very nicely done, my best wishes in the contest.