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Never Hated More

Irrational leak of thoughts, ideas and ideals so vain
A hopeless pontificating, sad pink structures of love
Crimes passing through Africa, the Tibet and Kiev
And the single moth is just drawing a starlight shape
A shape never detected by my eyes, why even bother?

Surrounded by your dresses and the patterns of my filth
Circling the edges of glamorous shows and your drama
And spiked ideas, corpses of swindler goals within a knot
Fade with your hypocrisy; I'll face you as long as I breathe
With my bold truths and wild anger leaving me chained

Rhyme, whine and cry; grateful of your hate feed I am
Cold blooded feelings and, yes, my smile's crescendo
Macabre, haunting nails digging in your inner terror
For I'm consuming myself in your own product: Hate

Author notes

Option 3: Acrostics. Word: "Never". If you want to find the acrostic, read every last letter of the poem.
If anyone happens to read this poem and also seems to know me, at least a little, this poem says pretty much about my actual situation. You should get away from me, I'm full of hate now and I might be dangerous.

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  • genevieve3
    April 4, 2008

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    i dont know u, but im not afraid. i would like to take away the hate so u can see that there are thing in you that are worthy!


  • HaileeDear
    March 30, 2008

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    Damn. The words you used really fit and added to this write so much. This is really creative and quite powerful. You didn't bore me for one moment here. It's really sad that you have this experience, but I can relate.
    xoxo
    pixie


  • isisspirit
    March 30, 2008

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    This absolutely blew my mind, on every level. It is creative genious on one hand and so emotionally intense that it absolutely takes the reader somewhere else.

    It makes me sick that this is going on, you have my ongoing empathy.

    The way you arranged the stanzas and the flow existed in the free verse. The last letter acrostic was incredibale, i couldn't believe the creativity of it, so clever. What you say is eye opening to some, and reaffirmation to others, but either way it takes the reader to another place, inside your heart it seems, and allows them to feel what you felt while writing this.

    A fantastic write. Best of luck.